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Wednesday, November 24, 2021

Asttle Writing - My Sliced Knee

Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING
The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.

6 weeks ago I was following dad to the rubbish hole that dad made with the digger/ friend too.Then we were half way their and I fell off and sliced my knee open on a very sharp rock.Then I had to go to the hospital,Mum took me and dad took me and ocean/lavana too.It wa'sent on my motorbikes it was on my other bike.And after that I had to have cruchers and a moom boot on.But I did not have the boot on because I did not brake my knee.I just had the leg bit on.I went home and restard on the couch,and played on my chromebook and played evio witch I found on crazy games.And online to,at the search button. 

So this is what thay put on my knee.

*some spescel water. 
*X-ray.
*cleaned it.
*glued it with spesel gule.
*moon boot.
*cruchers.
* then home to rest.

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