Once upon a time there were two sisters called Kahu and Sissy. Kahu had to do all the stuff her self because was anoued at Sissy because sissy was lazy. One day they found a magical kete in the garden and nana was turned into coal.
In the middle potiki, Sissy and Kahu needed to find Nana and Maui because they were taken to the underworld by pukeko and then she churned back into Nana.Te Ra the sun frose Kahus mouth so she culdint talk.And then Te Ra called Sissy Maui Girl.Because she done a lot of trikes too.Then piwakawaka said to sissy everyone says that my eyes are big and bulgy eyes.And then sissy said no!
Next steps
- Re read each sentence - does it make sense?
- Full stops and capital letters
- Correct your 'fast' words.
Te Ra.
Sissy and Kahu.At the end pukeko took Maui to the underworld because pukeko was angry at mahuika because she burnt pukekos nose. And then mahuika put pukekos nose back to normal in steed of a burnt nos!
